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Star light, star bright, the first star in this dreary night, hear my wish, hear my prayer, free me from this great despair.
Grant my wings, feathered grace, a tear upon my frightened face.
The endless night is now here, the morning sun is all but near.
Oh shimmering star in the heavens above,  grant me my wish for true love.
Lost in a sea of broken dreams, waiting to re-hem the tattered seams.
Love is deceptions, life is cruel, but it’s not easy, heck that’s the rule.
Sparkling star, so near, yet far, how I wish to catch you in a jar.
I admire your freedom oh sparkling chum,
One day I’ll join you, and shine brightly too!  
Guide me, lead me, watch me grow, just you wait, one day I’ll glow!
You are a single speck of glowing hope, winking at me through my telescope.
Twinkling brightly like a diamond in the sky, up so very, very high.
I’m a star too, and so are you.
You may be aching, your heart might be breaking, but remember we are all stars in the making.
©2007-2009 =RheaTorieSoto
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Author's Comments

This is supposed to be an inspirational poem with "Twinkle, Twinkle Little star" and the little "star ligh, star bright" thing in it.
Remember to always be you, the true you, to be and love yourself for who you are...and that we are all stars in the making.

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:iconkatherine5005:
Lovely.

And something I needed to read at this moment.

Good job.
:iconpickledweasel:
i love how you interpreted the classic nursery rhyme! this is a fav for sure!

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Even in my own beliefs
Confusion reigns supreme
Nothing ever quite adds up
The answers escape me
-"Full Circle", Tramis-377
:iconmikeyswine:
I love it! Wonderful romanticism on Twinkle Twinkle! I want o reach for some stars now! Congratulations on making me smile with Rhyme and describe a star and some metaphorical language! =+)
:+fav:

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Like a monkey, life will sometimes unexpectantly throw shit at you.
:iconrheatoriesoto:
no problem...I am always happy to help people in any way I can. That is why I was put here on this earth, to help people, espscially believe in themselves. I get picked on quite a lot, but I brush it off, that's why I know so much. Not everyone in this world likes me, most people at my school don't...but one day they'll regret not learning how to be themselves and to be true! ^_^
Thanks!

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It\'s like life is happening all around me- people are moving on, things are changing- but I\'m still in the same place, in the world of the dead, when all I really want to do is feel alive again.
Loverly icon by *Happy-Hacker
:iconhikarou:
This is fascinating, and I love it. Kudos to this poem it is excellent. :ninjabattle:

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To Live and Love... that is the greatest adventure.
:ninjabattle:
:iconrheatoriesoto:
thanks....I really wanted to do one like that! ^_^

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It\'s like life is happening all around me- people are moving on, things are changing- but I\'m still in the same place, in the world of the dead, when all I really want to do is feel alive again.
Loverly icon by *Happy-Hacker
:iconrheatoriesoto:
wow...that is probably the deepest anyone has gotten from my poems...aside form my teacher! Thanks! ^_^

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It\'s like life is happening all around me- people are moving on, things are changing- but I\'m still in the same place, in the world of the dead, when all I really want to do is feel alive again.
Loverly icon by *Happy-Hacker
:iconrheatoriesoto:
thank you! ^_^ What can I say I have a gift!

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It\'s like life is happening all around me- people are moving on, things are changing- but I\'m still in the same place, in the world of the dead, when all I really want to do is feel alive again.
Loverly icon by *Happy-Hacker
:iconmikeyswine:
You're so welcome! I'm a fan of rhyme scheme and general kick-ass-ery! Do you write very often?

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Like a monkey, life will sometimes unexpectantly throw shit at you.
:iconrheatoriesoto:
Yes, everyday. Writing is my passion and love. I would love to find a guy that loves writing as much as me! Stories, poetry, lyrics...you name it!

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It\'s like life is happening all around me- people are moving on, things are changing- but I\'m still in the same place, in the world of the dead, when all I really want to do is feel alive again.
Loverly icon by *Happy-Hacker

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